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I feel like a prisoner of my own mind.
Chained to a wall.
No madder how many times I think I've escape from it.
I end up right back in my shackles.

Freedom never lasts.
No madder how hard I try to get away.
No madder what I do.
I end up back in this dark place.
Shackles around my ankles,
With a chain hooked to a wall.
And bars for a door.
There is no light here in this dark place.
There is no real escape.
I'll always end up back here.
No madder what.

          I am a prisoner,
                         Of my own mind.

      And there is no key to this jail cell.
                     Because,
                      
                                You can't escape from yourself.
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Straight from the heart.
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puddlethecat Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This makes me sad, but in a good way; hard to explain but amazing!
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Squirrelboy265 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
So true this is, well written and in quite an interesting shape. But the thing is, though you can't leave your jail cell, you can change it. You can replace the bars with a fence, or a field, or a cliff.
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CosmeticGore Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011  Hobbyist
Hm, I've tired the fence before for some odd reason it turned into one made of human arms.. >.<
But I will have to try the others sometime.
And thank you btw.
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Squirrelboy265 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
That's quite...scary

You're welcome.
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CosmeticGore Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Hobbyist
Eh, its normal for my mind *shrugs* I'm used to scary.
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Squirrelboy265 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
Well, it definitely makes you quite a unique character to think in such a manner.
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CosmeticGore Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Hobbyist
*nods* So I've been told.
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x0xVampirex0x Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
i love you bestie
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CosmeticGore Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011  Hobbyist
I love you too hun.
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x0xVampirex0x Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
<3
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